怎麼才能寫出高分英語作文呢？這絕對是困擾所有學生的一個煩人的問題。英語作文的分數在一張卷子中也佔了挺重的比例，因此英語要拿高分，英語作文得高分是必不可少的條件。其實寫好英語作文並不難，下面讓我來給大家講講我是怎麼寫高分英語作文的吧！
工具/原料
英語書面表達
原文
首先呢，這裡給出我的一個同學叫我修改的一篇作文原型。這篇作文寫得非常一般，大家可以先看看想想裡面的一些錯誤的部分吧。
Hello everyone .Now please let me introduce myself to you .My name is LiuFeng and l am twenty years old .I graduated from high school in the NanCheng .I am the only boy in my family.For my own hobbies l love play basketball ande listening to music and watch English movies and so on.For these hobbies you can see l not only like to sports and also like to live a feer life.For my parents both of them are workers. They are always busy working .Do not have much time to accompany me .But l also love they very much.At present l am satified with my life the activies in schoo are great of course my teachers and classmates are friendly to me. That is。
可以看到這篇英語作文語病不少，詞彙全都是低階詞彙而且語句也是簡單句，通篇毫無亮點，下面讓我來給大家看看我是怎麼幫他修改的。可能我寫的也不是非常好，但是對大家來說還是非常有借鑑意義的！
我們寫作文的時候，語文老師經常會強調鳳頭豬肚和豹尾，這幾個詞非常恰當的寫出了拿高分作文的技巧。下面讓我來給大家細細分析下如何達到這幾點。
鳳頭
鳳頭就是開篇儘量能有個複合句和高階詞彙來向閱卷老師展示自己英語的深厚實力。比如，原文的Hello everyone .Now please let me introduce myself to you .我們可以改成：Hello everyone .As it's our first time to meet each other,please let me make a brief introduction to you guys.這樣一個複合句就比原文的簡單句好多了，而且能夠給老師一開篇就有了良好的印象。
說到這，又要提到另外一個問題了。我們都知道，寫作文開篇吸引眼球對自己能夠拿高分是至關重要的，因此，不少同學就在開頭來各種高階語句。這種做法運用的不當也是很致命的，很容易使得寫作的內容偏題，使得效果適得其反。
例如，很多同學急於向老師展現自己積累的短語和高階句子，開頭就寫：As time goes by，a happy summer vocation has passed away......這樣開頭寫這麼多看似精彩的開頭實際上已經跑題了。
豬肚
豬肚說的是文章的內容要充實飽滿，不要太過單調乏味。因為閱卷老師通常是對文章的中間內容一掃而過的，所以儘量不要出語句語病就基本上沒什麼大問題了，我們要做的是儘量使文章內容豐滿。
例如原文的I graduated from high school in the NanCheng .我們為了增加字數可以改寫成：Maybe different from you，I was studying in a small but peaceful city called Nancheng.There is a very wonderful school——NO1 Middle School Of Nancheng with a long long history and I feel very proud that I can study in it.
這樣是不是好多了呢！
原文的For my own hobbies l love play basketball ande listening to music and watch English movies and so on.For these hobbies you can see l not only like to sports and also like to live a feer life.
這裡有一個錯誤，對於我的興趣愛好而言不是for 而是as for。還有就是play要改成playing。
我們可以將這句話改成As for my hobbies,I love playing basketball with my friends and we often enjoy ourselves.After playing basketball we go home talking and laughing side by side in the sunset,which is a really fantastic thing and makes me wanna do that over and over again.
原文的For these hobbies you can see l not only like to sports and also like to live a feer life.我們可以再繼續美化，適當加點連線詞是非常必要的，如下
What's more,listening to music is also my hobby which can let me feel free in the tiring and stressful world.
下面一句For my parents both of them are workers. They are always busy working .Do not have much time to accompany me .But l also love they very much.怎麼將其繼續美化呢？請大家看看我寫的怎麼樣吧：
Both of my parents are workers.In order to earn a living and pay for my school fee,they are usually working hard,which causes that I can hardly have time to stay with them.However,we love eath other deeply and I make a promise I will buy them a big home and give them a happy and relaxing life someday.
豹尾
好的，寫到這，豹尾終於來啦。豹尾就是講究結尾乾淨利落並且讓人回味無窮，這樣的結尾能夠打動閱卷老師，分數自然而然就上去啦！！
原文結尾At present l am satified with my life the activies in schoo are great of course my teachers and classmates are friendly to me. That is。我們可以看到有幾處錯誤。首先單詞有幾個錯誤，這裡我就不列舉出來了大家都很容易看出來，還有就是結尾是That's all。
繼續將其美化：
As far as I'm concerned,I'm so satified with my life and the various of school activities that I love my univesity.I hope I can live in harmony with you and make progess everyday!
由於整篇文章是自我介紹，所以結尾加個That's all, thank you!會更好很多。
總結
寫英語書面表達的技巧很多，但是總的方法還是以上幾點，平時的英語學習過程中要注意多記單詞積累名言名句，這樣能夠讓自己的文章出現閃光點。希望這篇文章對大家有所幫助吧，謝謝大家。
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