英語作文實用開篇句的改寫方法講解

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　　Since ①the beginning of the industrial revolution,②techonology and economic growth have conspired to create a world in which the flexing of muscles is more and more ③an option rather than a necessity.

　　自從工業革命開始後，科技和經濟發展共同創造了一個新世界。在這個新世界裡，鍛鍊身體越來越成為人們的一種選擇，而非迫切需要。

　　依舊是競爭壓力與成績的例子o╯□╰o

　　1.競爭壓力：①將the beginning of the industrial revolution替換為the social competition becoming more fiercer。

　　②將techonology and economic growth have conspired to create a world in which the flexing of muscles替換為finding a satisfactory job or standing at a higher stage is necessity for people so that the pressure of competition。

　　③將an option ...a necessity 替換為 a difficulty...a small problem。

　　→Since the social competition becoming more fiercer, finding a satisfactory job or standing at a higher stage is necessity for people so that the pressure of competition is more and more a difficulty rather than only a small problem.

　　自從社會競爭愈加激烈後，找到一份令人滿意的工作或者站在一個更高的平臺對人們來說非常必要。由此帶來的競爭壓力越來越成為人們的難題，而非僅僅是個小問題。

　　接著可以和昨天一樣說一下社會競爭帶來的問題，1-2句，然後亮明自己觀點→第一段結束

　　2.成績是否總是有益：

　　①將the beginning of the industrial revolution替換為the frequency of education。

　　②將techonology and economic growth have conspired to create a world in which the flexing of muscles替換為there has been an increasing awareness that higher education will bring more oppotunities for us that the progress 。

　　③將an option ...a necessity 替換為 a means ...an end。

　　→Since the frquency of education, there has been an increasing awareness that higher education will bring more oppotunities for us that the progress is just more and more a means rather than an end.

　　自從教育普及後，人們越來越清楚意識到接受高等教育會給我們帶來更多機遇。成績只是手段而非目標。

　　接下來可以直接多寫1-2解釋句→第一段結束

　　作者|二琳

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