英語六級作文強化深度精講
General 更新 2024年11月29日
寫作的三大原則：
第一條原則：vary***變化、多樣***
第二條原則：input ***輸入、投入***
語言學習的五種技能：聽***listening***、說***speaking***、讀***reading***、
寫***writing***、譯***translating***。
第三條原則：practise ***練習***
寫作出題分析
一、出題內容
六級考試的作文內容為社會、文化或日常生活的一般常識，不涉及知識面過廣、專業性太強的內容。具體說來可以分為兩個方面：
（2）關於社會問題的話題：2006年6月6級作文
二、出題形式
六級考試作文的出題方式有：命題作文，看圖畫或圖表作文，根據所給文章（英文或中文）寫出文章摘要或大意，給出關鍵詞作文等。
根據具體特點六級考試作文可以分為以下五個型別：對立觀點型、解決問題型、諺語警句型、圖表圖畫型、應用寫作型。
（一）對立觀點型
2000年6月
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on
1. 很多人認為有必要舉行英語口語考試，理由是......
2. 也有人持不同意見，......
3. 我的看法和打算
（二） 解決問題型
2003年12月
Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a short essay entitled Reduce Waste on Campus. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
1．有些大學校園浪費的現象日益嚴重
2．浪費的危害
3．杜絕浪費，從我做起
2000年1月
Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic How I Finance My College Education. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline ***given in Chinese*** below:
1. 上大學的費用（tuition and fees）可以通過多種途徑解決。
2. 哪種途徑適合我（說明理由）。
1998年1月
Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic My View on Fake Commodities. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline ***given in Chinese*** below:
1. 假冒偽劣商品的危害
2. 怎樣杜絕假冒偽劣商品
（三）諺語警句型
1997年1月
Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Haste Makes Waste. You should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline ***given in Chinese*** below.
1. 為什麼“欲速則不達”？
2. 舉例說明。
（四）圖表圖畫型
2006年6月
2003年9月
2003年6月
2002年6月
1996年6月
1992年1月
1991年6月
（五）應用寫作型
2005年12月
2004年6月
2002年1月
2001年6月
三、時間與字數
六級考試作文要求在30分鐘內寫出一篇不少於150詞的文章。
平均一行的合理字數為8 - 10個單詞，六級寫作最合理字數為180左右。
30分鐘的合理安排：5***審題和構思***+20***正文***+5***檢查***
六級寫作改卷分析
應對改卷的五大策略
1、字跡清楚，段落明朗
2、內容完整，緊扣提綱
3、首句正確，再求閃光
4、先總後分，連詞用上
5、語言簡練，內容得當
具體改卷示例
例項一
2003年1月真題
④Now in our society, many people are not honest in doing soming. We often can meet with soming happened cause by people who are not honest. For example, Now we take the bus need carry cents own, and when you upstairs the bus, you should put the cent into the money box. Every people do that, but some of the people put the other things instead the cents. For another example, it is more normal that in the exams we can always find some students see others.?
I consider that every people should be honest. As a people, honest should be first, because it can make us to be increase and make our socity develop. In doing every thing we should be honest all, study, word, life and so on. If you are honest, every people will be friend to you, and who will regard you are good people.
But if you don’t be honest, people must unwilling to trath with you. So if you are want to be a good people, remember honest first.?
⑤Nowadays, many people choose not to be honest in our modern society. We almost can find such things every day of our life: some students cheat in the exam for higher marks; some corporations tell wrong data to the public in order to get more investment; and some doctors treat their patients with unnecessary and expensive medicines in order to make money, sometimes damaged the patients’ health, even their life.
Seeing this situation. I think it must be changed. Being honest will benefit not only others, but also ourselves. First, your honesty will make others willing to trust you. Second, being honest can lead you to face your problem bravely, which helps to solve it. And the last, honest surely helps to make the society more harmony.
So. I think everyone should start to be honest and everyone should have the idea that our society can not do without honesty.
例項二
1999年6月真題
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Reading Selectively or Extensively? You should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline ***given in Chinese*** below:
1. 有些人認為讀書要有選擇
2. 有些人認為應當博覽群書
3. 我的看法
①When it comes to reading, some people think that reading selectively is a good way, but some other people do not agree with them, they think that reading extensively is better.
Those people, who think that reading selectively is better, believe that good books are as many as bad books. Those good books can give us pleasure and knowledge, while those bad books can only lead us to the wrong way. So, they suggest that we should only choose the good books to read and never touch the bad books.
But, the other people, who hold that reading extensively is better, think that one kind of books can only give us one aspect of knowledge. Even the best book only contains one field of information. So, they can easily come to the conclusion that “to know more, to read more”. So they believe that reading extensively is better.
To my point, we should choose good books to read and read good books as many as possible. By this way, we can increase the quality and quantity of reading.
（11分）
注：when it comes to 當談到……的時候
When it comes to reading, opinions differ from person to person.
Those people who think that reading selectively is better believe that good books are as many as bad books.
可以表示“認為”：argue, claim, assert, hold, maintain. 但這些詞一般跟在
第三人稱後面。
But 改為 However
the 去掉
to my point 改成 in my opinion / in my view / As far as I am concerned
②I think reading not only selectively but also extensively. Because the two sides are not contradict. Our time is limited. So we can not read every book in the world. However, we will not be interested in every book. We should read those books may be useful to ours, read those books which we like. But those books which we choose must be extensively so it can give ours all kinds of knowledge, news and so on, it also make ours become a wise man. On the one hand reading selectively let ours not waste our time which it is limitted. Moreover it can emphasis among all books that we can read. On the other hand reading extensively can deal with all kinds of need in our life. They are all useful to ours.
（5分）
③Most people thought that read books should have been selectived. But others belived reading extentively was correction.
Selective books or reading extensively?
Sure, you can choice one from previous ideas,
on one hand, There are too book to read for us. We should choose those which we intrested, and it
would be helpful for us.
on another hand. Someone’s intresting was wide. Each book could bring you specific contain we couldn’t reading at only one level.
I confirmed all of these ideas were good but weren’t wise.
As a reader, the main task is to discover more and more books the second task is to held some which wonderful and helpful for us. Don’t treat these books with rackless abandon.
The best technology of reading is connect.
（2分）
④How should we read? Should we read selectively or extensively? Everyone has his own view.
Some people think we should read selectively. They argue that with the development of modern science and technology, more and more books are published. It is impossible for us to read all the books. What’s more, there are many bad books that are poisonous to our mind, and we shouldn’t read them. Since we can’t read all the books and we shouldn’t read bad books, we must read selectively.
But others may not agree. They emphasize that today’s society is not what it was. If one man has many kinds of knowledge he’ll have more chances to succeed. If a man knows much in one field but knows nothing in other fields, he may be useless. Since we must have many kinds of knowledge, we must read extensively.
Who’s right? I think both of them have something right. But I think we should read extensively first. We should read books in many fields, and read selectively in one field.
（14分）
注：more and more 可改為 an increasing number of
⑤ Some people think reading shall be choosed. Because some books are good to hummen beings and some books are harmful to people.
Some people think that men shoud read books widely. Because wide reading can help man get much knowledge. And man can use it to change the world.
It is my point that reading must be selectively. Because reading is important to man. Some books can help man but some books can lead some people to crime. It can be seen in the newspapers and watched on TV. We can make full use of some good books and gain more useful knowledge. It can make our life more beauiful. We must give up those unhelpful books. They are not good to us. Reading them is wasting time and money. So reading selectively is an important part in reading.
（8分）
例項一 2003年1月真題
Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic It Pays to Be Honest. You should write at least 150 words and base your composition on the outline ***given in Chinese*** below:
1. 當今社會上存在著很多不誠實的現象。
2. 誠實利人利己，做人應該誠實。
It Pays to Be Honest
①In our modern social life, there are many examples around us show many people are cheated. Advertisements cheat people, salesmen cheat people, even one’s closest friends cheat him or her. So many heartbreaks are heard everyday that we cannot help asking: where is our honest exist?
Everybody is taught honest in the primary school or even in the kindergarten. Honesty does good not only to ourselves, but to others as well. If we are honest to others. We will be happier and be in a better mood. Otherwise, we’ll feel guilt at last. To a company and its advertisement, honesty will bring it more consumer and more profit. If we cheat others, friends will never believe you and they will leave you alone. To a company, no consumer will buy your product again.?
So, as the above is said, it pays to be honest. Let’s create a morally outstanding social.?
注：show改為showing或 在show前加 that
honest 前應加上to be
as the above is said 正確語序為 as is said above
②Although honesty is believed to be a virtue, there are still dishonest people in our society. For example, some businessmen sell fake product to their consumers; some students cheat in the exams.?
Dishonest people are short-sighted. Those who sell fake products may make money at first, but consumers won’t buy their products any more. As a result, they will lose their fortune or even be sent to prison. By contrast, honest people gain a lot. Those who always tell truth or keep to their promise not only let others trust them but gain respect from other people as well. Such persons are sure to have a lot of good friends. Because they are trustable and respectable, everyone is eager to make friends with them. Besides, it is easier for a person with a good record to get a good job. Generally speaking, every employer wants his employees to be honest. So we can say that anyone who is honest will be paid back later.?
In a word, honesty wins trust, respect and honor. So it is important that we should be honest.
注：product應改為複數形式
③With the development of modern economic and industry, competitive is becoming more and more obvious. At the same time, the performance of dishonest is becoming more and more clearly.?
Nowadays, there are many dishonest performance in our society. For example, some people found that he saled goods had past the preservation date. Not throw them away, they revised the perservation date, and saled them again after several days. Another case in the point, a pair of shoes was made from goat. However, in order to sale at a high price, the salers would say they were made from cow which has good quality.?
From the foregoing, we can see that dishonest dose not only harm to yourselves but also harm to others. And it is no use only realise the harmness of dishonest. We should be honest from now on and be honest in our daily life. It is only that people all over the world are honest them our country will be beautiful and wealthy.?
注：economic 改為 economy
industry 改為 society
competitive 改為 competition
obvious 改為 fierce ***激烈的***
more and more 最好改為 increasingly
phenomenon/phenomena 現象
behavior/action 行為
fur 皮毛 skin 面板
leather 皮革
hide 獸皮
from 改為 of
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英語六級作文強化深度精講
第一條原則：vary***變化、多樣***
第二條原則：input ***輸入、投入***
語言學習的五種技能：聽***listening***、說***speaking***、讀***reading***、
寫***writing***、譯***translating***。
第三條原則：practise ***練習***
寫作出題分析
一、出題內容
六級考試的作文內容為社會、文化或日常生活的一般常識，不涉及知識面過廣、專業性太強的內容。具體說來可以分為兩個方面：
（2）關於社會問題的話題：2006年6月6級作文
二、出題形式
六級考試作文的出題方式有：命題作文，看圖畫或圖表作文，根據所給文章（英文或中文）寫出文章摘要或大意，給出關鍵詞作文等。
根據具體特點六級考試作文可以分為以下五個型別：對立觀點型、解決問題型、諺語警句型、圖表圖畫型、應用寫作型。
（一）對立觀點型
2000年6月
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on
1. 很多人認為有必要舉行英語口語考試，理由是......
2. 也有人持不同意見，......
3. 我的看法和打算
（二） 解決問題型
2003年12月
Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a short essay entitled Reduce Waste on Campus. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
1．有些大學校園浪費的現象日益嚴重
2．浪費的危害
3．杜絕浪費，從我做起
2000年1月
Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic How I Finance My College Education. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline ***given in Chinese*** below:
1. 上大學的費用（tuition and fees）可以通過多種途徑解決。
2. 哪種途徑適合我（說明理由）。
1998年1月
Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic My View on Fake Commodities. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline ***given in Chinese*** below:
1. 假冒偽劣商品的危害
2. 怎樣杜絕假冒偽劣商品
（三）諺語警句型
1997年1月
Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Haste Makes Waste. You should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline ***given in Chinese*** below.
1. 為什麼“欲速則不達”？
2. 舉例說明。
（四）圖表圖畫型
2006年6月
2003年9月
2003年6月
2002年6月
1996年6月
1992年1月
1991年6月
（五）應用寫作型
2005年12月
2004年6月
2002年1月
2001年6月
三、時間與字數
六級考試作文要求在30分鐘內寫出一篇不少於150詞的文章。
平均一行的合理字數為8 - 10個單詞，六級寫作最合理字數為180左右。
30分鐘的合理安排：5***審題和構思***+20***正文***+5***檢查***
六級寫作改卷分析
應對改卷的五大策略
1、字跡清楚，段落明朗
2、內容完整，緊扣提綱
3、首句正確，再求閃光
4、先總後分，連詞用上
5、語言簡練，內容得當
具體改卷示例
例項一
2003年1月真題
④Now in our society, many people are not honest in doing soming. We often can meet with soming happened cause by people who are not honest. For example, Now we take the bus need carry cents own, and when you upstairs the bus, you should put the cent into the money box. Every people do that, but some of the people put the other things instead the cents. For another example, it is more normal that in the exams we can always find some students see others.?
I consider that every people should be honest. As a people, honest should be first, because it can make us to be increase and make our socity develop. In doing every thing we should be honest all, study, word, life and so on. If you are honest, every people will be friend to you, and who will regard you are good people.
But if you don’t be honest, people must unwilling to trath with you. So if you are want to be a good people, remember honest first.?
⑤Nowadays, many people choose not to be honest in our modern society. We almost can find such things every day of our life: some students cheat in the exam for higher marks; some corporations tell wrong data to the public in order to get more investment; and some doctors treat their patients with unnecessary and expensive medicines in order to make money, sometimes damaged the patients’ health, even their life.
Seeing this situation. I think it must be changed. Being honest will benefit not only others, but also ourselves. First, your honesty will make others willing to trust you. Second, being honest can lead you to face your problem bravely, which helps to solve it. And the last, honest surely helps to make the society more harmony.
So. I think everyone should start to be honest and everyone should have the idea that our society can not do without honesty.
例項二
1999年6月真題
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Reading Selectively or Extensively? You should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline ***given in Chinese*** below:
1. 有些人認為讀書要有選擇
2. 有些人認為應當博覽群書
3. 我的看法
①When it comes to reading, some people think that reading selectively is a good way, but some other people do not agree with them, they think that reading extensively is better.
Those people, who think that reading selectively is better, believe that good books are as many as bad books. Those good books can give us pleasure and knowledge, while those bad books can only lead us to the wrong way. So, they suggest that we should only choose the good books to read and never touch the bad books.
But, the other people, who hold that reading extensively is better, think that one kind of books can only give us one aspect of knowledge. Even the best book only contains one field of information. So, they can easily come to the conclusion that “to know more, to read more”. So they believe that reading extensively is better.
To my point, we should choose good books to read and read good books as many as possible. By this way, we can increase the quality and quantity of reading.
（11分）
注：when it comes to 當談到……的時候
When it comes to reading, opinions differ from person to person.
Those people who think that reading selectively is better believe that good books are as many as bad books.
可以表示“認為”：argue, claim, assert, hold, maintain. 但這些詞一般跟在
第三人稱後面。
But 改為 However
the 去掉
to my point 改成 in my opinion / in my view / As far as I am concerned
②I think reading not only selectively but also extensively. Because the two sides are not contradict. Our time is limited. So we can not read every book in the world. However, we will not be interested in every book. We should read those books may be useful to ours, read those books which we like. But those books which we choose must be extensively so it can give ours all kinds of knowledge, news and so on, it also make ours become a wise man. On the one hand reading selectively let ours not waste our time which it is limitted. Moreover it can emphasis among all books that we can read. On the other hand reading extensively can deal with all kinds of need in our life. They are all useful to ours.
（5分）
③Most people thought that read books should have been selectived. But others belived reading extentively was correction.
Selective books or reading extensively?
Sure, you can choice one from previous ideas,
on one hand, There are too book to read for us. We should choose those which we intrested, and it
would be helpful for us.
on another hand. Someone’s intresting was wide. Each book could bring you specific contain we couldn’t reading at only one level.
I confirmed all of these ideas were good but weren’t wise.
As a reader, the main task is to discover more and more books the second task is to held some which wonderful and helpful for us. Don’t treat these books with rackless abandon.
The best technology of reading is connect.
（2分）
④How should we read? Should we read selectively or extensively? Everyone has his own view.
Some people think we should read selectively. They argue that with the development of modern science and technology, more and more books are published. It is impossible for us to read all the books. What’s more, there are many bad books that are poisonous to our mind, and we shouldn’t read them. Since we can’t read all the books and we shouldn’t read bad books, we must read selectively.
But others may not agree. They emphasize that today’s society is not what it was. If one man has many kinds of knowledge he’ll have more chances to succeed. If a man knows much in one field but knows nothing in other fields, he may be useless. Since we must have many kinds of knowledge, we must read extensively.
Who’s right? I think both of them have something right. But I think we should read extensively first. We should read books in many fields, and read selectively in one field.
（14分）
注：more and more 可改為 an increasing number of
⑤ Some people think reading shall be choosed. Because some books are good to hummen beings and some books are harmful to people.
Some people think that men shoud read books widely. Because wide reading can help man get much knowledge. And man can use it to change the world.
It is my point that reading must be selectively. Because reading is important to man. Some books can help man but some books can lead some people to crime. It can be seen in the newspapers and watched on TV. We can make full use of some good books and gain more useful knowledge. It can make our life more beauiful. We must give up those unhelpful books. They are not good to us. Reading them is wasting time and money. So reading selectively is an important part in reading.
（8分）
例項一 2003年1月真題
Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic It Pays to Be Honest. You should write at least 150 words and base your composition on the outline ***given in Chinese*** below:
1. 當今社會上存在著很多不誠實的現象。
2. 誠實利人利己，做人應該誠實。
It Pays to Be Honest
①In our modern social life, there are many examples around us show many people are cheated. Advertisements cheat people, salesmen cheat people, even one’s closest friends cheat him or her. So many heartbreaks are heard everyday that we cannot help asking: where is our honest exist?
Everybody is taught honest in the primary school or even in the kindergarten. Honesty does good not only to ourselves, but to others as well. If we are honest to others. We will be happier and be in a better mood. Otherwise, we’ll feel guilt at last. To a company and its advertisement, honesty will bring it more consumer and more profit. If we cheat others, friends will never believe you and they will leave you alone. To a company, no consumer will buy your product again.?
So, as the above is said, it pays to be honest. Let’s create a morally outstanding social.?
注：show改為showing或 在show前加 that
honest 前應加上to be
as the above is said 正確語序為 as is said above
②Although honesty is believed to be a virtue, there are still dishonest people in our society. For example, some businessmen sell fake product to their consumers; some students cheat in the exams.?
Dishonest people are short-sighted. Those who sell fake products may make money at first, but consumers won’t buy their products any more. As a result, they will lose their fortune or even be sent to prison. By contrast, honest people gain a lot. Those who always tell truth or keep to their promise not only let others trust them but gain respect from other people as well. Such persons are sure to have a lot of good friends. Because they are trustable and respectable, everyone is eager to make friends with them. Besides, it is easier for a person with a good record to get a good job. Generally speaking, every employer wants his employees to be honest. So we can say that anyone who is honest will be paid back later.?
In a word, honesty wins trust, respect and honor. So it is important that we should be honest.
注：product應改為複數形式
③With the development of modern economic and industry, competitive is becoming more and more obvious. At the same time, the performance of dishonest is becoming more and more clearly.?
Nowadays, there are many dishonest performance in our society. For example, some people found that he saled goods had past the preservation date. Not throw them away, they revised the perservation date, and saled them again after several days. Another case in the point, a pair of shoes was made from goat. However, in order to sale at a high price, the salers would say they were made from cow which has good quality.?
From the foregoing, we can see that dishonest dose not only harm to yourselves but also harm to others. And it is no use only realise the harmness of dishonest. We should be honest from now on and be honest in our daily life. It is only that people all over the world are honest them our country will be beautiful and wealthy.?
注：economic 改為 economy
industry 改為 society
competitive 改為 competition
obvious 改為 fierce ***激烈的***
more and more 最好改為 increasingly
phenomenon/phenomena 現象
behavior/action 行為
fur 皮毛 skin 面板
leather 皮革
hide 獸皮
from 改為 of
英語六級作文強化深度精講