大學英語作文及點評

　　大學太悠閒不好，即使很有空，也要多閱讀幾篇英語作文讓自己忙碌起來。下面是小編給大家整理的，供大家參閱!

　　：On Equality

　　In the days when a woman's entire obligation was to be a good daughter, a good wife and a good mother, men and women were far from equal. Women suffered sexual discrimination until the so-called feminism came into being. Nowadays, feminism has been running for over a century. Result? It ran into the extreme of "equality" from my perspective.

　　Most of us agree that men and women should enjoy equality in this modern society. But what on earth does this equality mean? To be "equal", those for feminism would like to share everything with men they split bills, apply for masculine jobs,etc. They intended to buy in all the advantages and disadvantages of being a man. On their long journey to the "equal world",they've forgotten some basic facts they ARE women. Even school children know that women, after all, are different from men both physically and mentally. It is unwise, or even stupid,to ignore all these differences and pursue a so called "equal world". We couldn't expect a man to give birth to a baby as we couldn't expect the sun to rise in the west. Likewise, we couldn't expect a woman to become the world's fastest runner,as is simple, but seems forgotten by those feminists.

　　Equality is not bisecting everything. Real equality should be built upon the common sense of the basic sexual differences.Since some of the jobs can only be done well enough by men,women should not feel discriminated when we fail. After all,there're also some jobs, which can only be perfectly done with women's hands. These are not symbols of inequality, but natural laws. What really counts is equality in rights, reputation,etc. Only when all the individuals value the spirit of being equal can women really enjoy equality with men.

　　簡 評

　　男女平等是人們的美好夙願，但什麼才是真正的平等?怎樣促成平等的實現?一些女權主義者們所倡導的能帶來真正意義的平等嗎?這是文章要告訴我們的。

　　文章觀點比較獨特，向進行了一個多世紀的女權運動提出了質疑。開篇亮出了觀點，明確表態。“Nowadays，feminism has been running for over a century.Result?It ran into the extreme of‘equality' from my perspective.”在第二段寫到女權運動在現今社會的產物，進一步指出，“It is unwise，or even stupid，to ignore a11 these differences and pursue a so-called ‘equal world~”，並且附加了兩個簡潔有力的事例項證，加強這一論述觀點。到此為止，文章的論述都是有條有理的，但文章接下來就急於結尾了，而對於什麼是真正的平等，和如何促成平等的實現，幾乎是一語帶過，只寫到，“What really counts is equality in rights，reputation，etc.”沒有展開任何的論述，感覺是指出了問題，卻沒找到真正的方向，最後一段的論述空洞，沒有說服力，讓人覺得虎頭蛇尾，實在可惜。

　　文章中的關聯詞使用得不多，從語言表述方面也還不夠成熟。英語語言是一種“chain laneuaee”，而準確、恰當的關聯詞是語言學習是否步入一個成熟階段的衡量指數，這也是該習作要注意提高的地方。

　　點評教師：盧愛華

　　：For What Purpose Do You Learn Foreign Languages

　　For what purpose do you learn foreign languages? To students, foreign languages are their curriculums. To job hunters, foreign languages are the stepping stones to success. To applicants for admission to foreign schools, languages are indispensable. With the Reform and Open Policy carried out, foreign languages have played a more and more important role in today's society. Competence for languages is one of the basic qualifications.

　　Furthermore, craze for language learning has been a social phenomenon. From children to senior citizens, everyone takes great pains. But think it over for what purpose are you learning the language? Only for occupations? For examinations? Language learning has been too utilitarian.

　　A rather queer phenomenon emerges from society that one can speak English or other languages so fluently but is not able to recite one of famous Tang poems. Many people, especially the young, try hard to master the foreign language but neglect the study of their own mother tongue. An advertisement of dairy products has caused my curiosity. The protagonist of the ad was a little girl aged only four. What astonished the spectators was that the girl could speak three different languages, English, Japanese and French. WHAT AGENIUS! She is by no means inferior to other child prodigies. The advertiser took advantage of this amazing fact to exaggerate the effects of the products. Nevertheless, for what purpose does the girl spare no efforts to master the three languages? Even to an adult, it is a difficult task.She must have lost the fun playing with her peers. She must have been for hours at end reciting the same word under the supervision of her parents. She must have been wondering why she should make such sacrifice. It is her parents who force her to learn in order to stand above. They might have been influenced by the idea that the earlier one child starts to learn the language,the easier he will master it. This is not unique, but comes in pairs. The age of the learners has been younger and younger.But educators have found that learning languages too early will affect the development of child's linguistic competence. The probable result is that the child might be Jack of all trades but master of none or, even worse, she might be unable to express

　　herself in her mother tongue .

　　It should be lamentable if Chinese tradition culture should be discarded and forgot. Maybe it is just an unwarranted anxiety or groundless fear. But one shouldn't forget his roots no matter when and where he is.

　　From my point of view, people have lost themselves in language learning. It is like killing the goose for eggs. One of the aims of learning is to gain a further insight into other different countries, to acquire oneself with the cultures and customs, not just to master the language. The process of learning is a treasure house. It is like an exploration of a new continent.

　　簡 評

　　“英語是中國社會的一大毒瘤”，現在經常能聽到人們對英語學習的狂熱如此抱怨。確實如此，世界上可能沒有哪個國家像中國這樣如此重視英語了：幼兒園的兒童學英語，福利院的白髮老人也學英語;到外企應聘考英語，考古專業的博士生入學考試也要考英語。學校裡，中國語文課時越來越少，英語課時越來越多。難怪有人說，現在有些學生的英語比漢語更好了。這種說法也許言過其實，但這種現象確實值得重視。本文提出了對這種現象的思考，鍼砭時弊，言之有物，語言流暢。但這篇文章的內容安排值得商榷：隨想過多，分析不夠。這也是中國同學寫作文是值得注意的普遍問題。

　　點評教師：汪中平

　　：Sexism at Work

　　Recent years see more girl students on the campus than boys, and girls perform as excellently as boys. Some are even superior and receive more praises and honors. Indeed, girls are equal to boys.

　　However, when they are getting out of the pure schoolyard and venture into the complicated society, they find themselves faced with many things different. Among them is sexism at work.

　　It begins with the job interview. Though females have made full preparation to cope with the situation, blatant sexism in the selection of staff will make it tough for them to please the inter viewer and render him to nod. More vacancies are open only to males. Sometimes, females will be rejected just because of their sex.

　　When females are lucky enough to be employed by a company, don't you assume that they are regarded as equal to males. I confess that the work they do is equal, however, disappointing ly, the pay is not. Women may do no less work but earn much less than men. To make matters worse, they're confronted with great possibility to be fired due to their marriage and pregnancy.Natural features appear to be a burden on women. Besides,women also hold less hope to be promoted. Once women in office may do trivial work such as typing and stenography while nowadays quite a large number of women are qualified for major task and ready for heavy responsibility. Unfortunately, they will barely have chances to display their talent. Eventually, only a few women succeed in winning high positions as well as high salaries. Common situation is that women are reduced to low positions and thus paid "accordingly".

　　In a society where human rights are strongly emphasized,it's terrible to see sexism demonstrated in almost every aspect of human life. All in all, equality between sexes is badly urged.Everybody, especially the victim of sexism at work, is looking forward to being treated equally.

　　簡 評

　　男女“生而平等”，但在現實生活中卻遭遇很多不平等。招聘時是這樣，工作中還是這樣。本文用“逆起式”開頭，先談高校中女生的優秀，然後過渡到本文主題：現代社會對女性的歧視。在正文中，先談女生應聘時遭遇的不公，再重點分析工作中她們遭遇的更多歧視以及這些歧視又是如何使女性顯得“低能”。這樣組織內容文章思路非常清楚。但同學們在使用“逆起式”開頭時需要謹慎：千萬不要寫得太長，否則就會進入主題太慢，給人拖泥帶水之嫌。

　　點評教師：汪中平

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