高一英語作文範文改錯

　　給幾篇高一水平的英語作文，你們能夠挑出它們的錯誤並進行改正嗎?下面是小編給大家整理的，供大家參閱!

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　　Two months ago, I went to abroad for further study. Before I left, I was given a lot present. Among them， there were two presents which were really interested me. My sister buys me a book with color pictures about body language and with words about customs of different country in them. My brother gave me a note which read, “My present has put in your bedroom.” When I hurried into my bedroom, I found a box, in that there was an electronic dictionary. I was very glad but a few surprised to receive these two presents.

　　答案：

　　1.have去掉 2.about後的you改為me 3.works→work 4.learn→learning

　　5.recent→recently 6.interesting→interest 7.English後的and改為but 8.be後加an

　　9.at→in 10.where後加there

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　　Dear Bob,

　　Hello. I learn about you from my English teacher, Miss Fang. I’d like to your penfriend, and get to know more about your country.

　　First, let me tell you something more about myself. My name is Li Hua. I live in Beijing, where is the capital of China. I go to Hongqi Middle School. We study quite a few subject, such as maths, Chinese, English and physics. I use to play ping-pong a lot on my spare time, but now I am interesting in football. Do you play any ball games? What your favorite sport? I look forward to hear from you soon.

　　Yours, Li Hua

　　答案：

　　1. learn 改為 learnt或learned。 2. to 後加 be 或 become。 3. 刪去more。第一次告訴 Bob 關於自己的一些事情， 此處用 more 不合邏輯。 4. where 改為 which。在此非限定性定語從句中， 關係詞在從句中作主語， 故用 which。 5. 此行無錯。 6. subject 改為 subjects。quits a few 意為“相當多”， 修飾可數名詞複數。 7. use 改為 used。據下文 but now 可知， 此處應用used to do 表示“過去常常 做某事”。 8. interesting 改為 interested。be interested in„為固定短語， “對„„感興趣”。 9. What 後加 is。此句無謂語。 10. hear 改為 hearing。look forward to doing sth.為固定短語。

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　　Dear Ralph,

　　I'm a senior student. I'm getting well with a boy in my class. But I have fallen in love with him for almost half a year. He is shy boy, so I wrote him a letter first to express my feeling. He wrote back. In his letter he said, "We are students. Our task is study hard. Let us to wait and see whether we have some chance after graduation." So after graduation I telephoned to him, ask him about going out. But he said he didn't want to. He just wanted to sleep and watched TV. What do you think I should do? Do you think I should continue to love him and give up?

　　答案：

　　1.getting 後加on或along 2.fallen改為been 3.shy前加a 4.feeling改為feelings 當情感講時feeling常用單數 5.study前加to或study改為studying 6.去掉to 7.去掉to 8.watched改為watch 9正確 10.and改為or

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　　I went to see the film after supper. On my way the cinema, I met an English woman, who lost her way. I gave up the chance see the film and took her to her hotel. While go there, I told her about great changes that had been taken place in the past few years and she had told me anything about her country. Although I missed the film, I still felt very happy, for I had not only helped her out of trouble but practise my spoken English. If I had not worked hard on English, I would have been able to help him.

　　答案：

　　the改為a 2.正確 3.see前加to 4.go改為going 5.去掉been 6.

　　去掉had 7.去掉but

　　8.去掉had 9.on改為at 10.him改為her

　　5

　　I have a good friend who’s name is Liu Mei. She is our monitor and one of the excellent student in our class. Although she is clever, but she works very hard. We have a lot on common and have a lot to talk about. One evening she told me that something happened when her parents was out. She was doing her homeworks one Sunday morning when she smelt something burning. She stopped look out of the window and find a cloud of smoke coming out of her neighbour’s house. She called 119 immediate. Ten minutes later, the firemen came and put out fire. Her neighbour was very thankful for her help.

　　答案：

　　who's 改為whose 2.正確 3.去掉but 4.on改為in 5.parents後加were 6.homeworks改為homework 7.stopped後加to 8.find改為found 9.immediate改為immediately 10.fire前加the

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