初中英語作文點評

　　英語作文一直是中學英語教學的薄弱環節,如果教師對於學生的引導不到位,就會出現閱讀教學的讀、寫分離現象。下面，是小編為你整理的，希望對你有幫助!

　　篇1

　　Last saturday ,my family kewn knew ***the news that***i I won ***the*** English competitionnews . inIn order to cerebrate i had won English competition***it***., my parents decided to go to ***a*** nearbourhood club play on this sunday .weWe were very happiedhappy andlooked forwardto playing.looking forward to it.

　　InOn that day ,we were gegot up ***very*** early and eathad breakfast ***quickly***. Then we walked to ***the*** club slowly ,and chated each other .on our way to ***the*** club ,we talked ourselvswith each other very happyhappliy. Quickly Soon,we arrived ***at the*** club . this club had all sorts of palyWe can do a lot of things and enjoy ourselves in this club.such as sportdoing some sports ,amusement ,study and so onand studying .Look!when my parents went to read room ,they going to read. My parents were going to the reading room to do some reading. Grandma was talkedtalking to ***some*** other olderold people abortabout they lifelives,.***My*** sisters playedwere playing badminton happily....what i didWhat did I do? I went to play computer games .we didn'tcamecome back until we palyedwere tired .What a happy day!

　　點評：

　　1、句首一定要大寫，要注意一些拼寫錯誤。

　　2、全文的時態一定要保持一致，如果是過去時就全部用過去時。

　　3、語法掌握得還是不太夠。如：動詞要用副詞來修飾，系動詞後要接形容詞，such as前不用逗號隔開等等

　　4、該同學努力嘗試描寫清楚一件事情，這種態度很好，堅持下去，多練練，會有收穫的。

　　篇2

　　***Nowadays,*** English is most widely used in the world,. It's very important，***b***But most of us have difficulty in learning it. If you have difficulty in English. ***feel that it is not that easy to learn English well,*** Here is some advice.

　　1. ***Firstly,/First of all,*** Listening ***listen to*** English songs,***and*** watch English movies.

　　2. ***Secondly,*** Reading a passage ***read some English passages***,***t***Then try to retell it ***them*** ***by*** yourself.we***We*** should speak English with our teachers,classmates an***and*** even with foreigners as often as possible.

　　3. ***Thirdly***You ***you*** can read the English paper or a magazine***s***.such as Chain***China*** Daily.

　　4. ***Forthly*** Keeping ***keeping*** a diary is a good way to practice your ***English*** writing.

　　5. ***Last but not least,*** If you can’t remember new words，you can copy them ***write them down*** onprices *** a piece*** of paper. ***then*** stick them ***it*** on the walls in your room.

　　In a word. ***All in all,*** If you can keep on learning English and never give up, I'm sure your

　　English will become ***be*** better and better!

　　點評：

　　1、三段式的寫作結構很好，清晰瞭然。

　　2、注意只有句首的首字母才需要大寫。

　　3、舉例或羅列時，最好不要用阿拉伯數字1、2、3……。要用英語寫，我已經在文中修改過了。

　　4、總體來說，句子結構相對簡單，可以嘗試用一兩句從句，這樣文章會增彩不少。

　　篇3

　　Hu Yue is my new friend，In our class, she likes singing and she can sing very well.

　　She's 1.60meters tall. she has blank hair and wears school uniform.She is very lovely and pretty. She likes eating hamburger, vegetable and peanuts and dislikes fishesfish, green tea and sweets,She also loves listening to music,reading and writing. Her favorite hobby is drawing. because she likes all the different colors,She is really great!

　　點評：本文基本沒有語法錯誤，但是篇幅太短，資訊傳遞不夠全面，同時沒有出彩的短語結構，可以在這幾方面再進行提升。

　　1*** 寫此類主題的作文可以不用分段

　　2***如能善用連線詞會更好，比如在描寫興趣愛好的時候可以用“…but……”“not only…but also…”等等