如何寫出英語高分作文

　　英語作文是一項綜合能力的考試，主要是考學生對詞彙、語法和句子結構以及連句成文的掌握程度。筆者認為，要想讓學生在規定的30分鐘內寫出一篇較好的作文，教師應該在平時的課堂教學中認真指導學生注重審題、切題、連貫通順、語法正確、語言規範這五個環節。本文旨在談談在寫出英語高分作文這個方面的具體作法。

　　一、寫作訣竅

　　總體把握，要點齊全;人稱時態，邏輯清楚;

　　關鍵詞彙，動詞第一;組詞成句，結構完整;

　　組句成文，連詞增色;此路不通，繞道迂迴;

　　字跡工整，留好印象;從句適量，高分有望。

　　二、寫作步驟

　　1.認真審題。審題包括要點、格式、詞數以及此篇文章要傳遞給讀者什麼樣的資訊，告誡讀者什麼***即寫作目的***。

　　2.確定文體和時態。確定文體後，根據不同文體的特點和要求進行組織材料;同時確定出該篇文章的總時態與時態的變化。

　　3.寫完要點，但不隨意發揮。

　　4.先草稿，後抄寫。

　　三、習作點評

　　[2004年全國中學生英語能力競賽初賽初三組] ***14分***

　　Choose one of your hobbies and write an article for the school magazine about it. tell the magazine readers.

　　﹒what exactly your hobby is;

　　﹒when and how you became interested in this hobby;

　　﹒why you enjoy your hobby;

　　﹒about your hopes and plans for the future.

　　寫作要求：

　　1. 根據所提供的內容，適當拓展想象空間，靈活地將提供的資訊體現在文章中。

　　2. 條理清楚，語句通順，書寫清晰、規範。

　　3. 詞數60-80。

　　[學生習作a]

　　My hobby is read books. when i was seven years old .

　　I became interested in reading books. I like needing books

　　Because there are a lot of useful things in books. I can learn

　　a lot of knowledge from books. Books also can teach me

　　how to be a good person . Books even can solve many

　　problems for me . I will read more good books to improve

　　myself.

　　①改為reading books，動詞作表語時應該用動名詞。

　　②also的位置應放在can之後。

　　[點評]：檔次9-11分。

　　①要點不全，漏掉最後一個要點。

　　②句子基本無誤，能正確傳遞資訊給讀者但文章不流暢，句子與句子之間過渡不自然，給讀者感覺在回答上述① ② ③問題。

　　③有少量錯誤。

　　[學生習作b]

　　My hobby is reading .reading books is very enjoyable .

　　When I was young, my mother used to tell me a story before

　　I went to bed every night .the stories were so interesting

　　that I always felt they weren't enough . So I began to read

　　books by myself .little by little I became interested in

　　reading . I can learn much knowledge and many interesting

　　things all over the world .when I read books , I can enjoy the

　　beautiful sentences . At the same time I can improve my

　　writing . I want to be a writer in the future, so I must study

　　hard and read more books so that my dream can come true .