高考英語優秀滿分作文講解

　　英語寫作部分一直是高考英語考試中的得分難點，學習滿分作文的寫作技巧是提高的關鍵。下面是小編帶來的，歡迎考生學習。

　　高考英語滿分作文***一***

　　【試題回放】假定你是李華，從小喜愛大熊貓***panda***,一直通過有關網站***website***關注三年前在美國聖迭哥動物園出生的大熊貓“蘇琳”和她的母親“白雲”。現在蘇琳即將三歲。請根據以下要點給動物園工作人員寫一封信：

　　1、 自我介紹; 2、祝賀蘇琳生日; 3、感謝工作人員; 4、索取蘇琳三歲生日照。

　　注意：1、詞數100左右;2、可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫;3、開頭語已為你寫好。

　　例文：

　　Dear Sir/Madam,

　　Greetings from China!

　　I’m Li Hua, a student in Sichuan. I’ve been a panda lover since I was a child. About three years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter Sulin and I’ve been watching her grow on your website,. Now she’s going to be three. I’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.

　　By the way, could I have a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthday? Thank you very much in advance.

　　Yours truly,

　　Li Hua

　　高考英語滿分作文講解

　　本文寫作的內容要點如下：

　　1.自我介紹;2.資訊來源;3.祝賀生日;4.感謝照顧;5.索取照片;6.合適的結尾。

　　這封信格式正確，行文規範，描述有條不紊，稱呼、正文中的開頭及結尾、結束語均表達到位。文章行文活潑，感情真摯，語言表述準確，洋溢著作者因大熊貓得到精心照顧而對美方人員的感激之情，以及希望自己願望成真，得到照片的希冀之情。長短句運用合理，結合了簡單句和複合句，流暢自然，不露痕跡，的確是一篇佳作。

　　積累卡片英漢互譯

　　好詞1.delighted adj.欣喜的，快樂的2.express v.表達 3.give birth to v.產生，生育

　　好句I’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.

　　我祝福它生日快樂並且對你們的辛勤工作表達我的感激之情，正是你們的努力工作讓蘇琳和它的父母在美國過著幸福和健康的生活。

　　評析：定語從句的使用。

　　高考英語滿分作文***二***

　　【試題回放】假設你是紅星中學高三一班的學生李華，為校刊英語園地寫一篇題為“Our Spring Outing” 的英文稿件。 請根據以下四幅圖的先後順序，敘述上週你們班從準備春遊到春遊結束的完整過程。

　　注意： 詞數不少於60.

　　提示詞： 遊樂園amusement park 垃圾箱bin

　　Last Thursday, we had a class meeting to discuss where to go for our spring outing. We came up with several choices such as going boating, climbing a mountain, and going to an amusement park. Finally, we decided to go mountain climbing.

　　The next day, we set off early in the morning. While climbing the mountain, we enjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view . However, when we reached the top, we were shocked to see litter here and there, such as bottles and banana peels. Then we started to pick up the litter and put the rubbish into the nearby recycling bin and non-recycling bin respectively.

　　We were tired but happy.

　　高考英語滿分作文講解

　　本情景作文的內容要點如下：1.討論;2.爬山;3.檢拾別人的垃圾;4.投放垃圾。內容要點可用不同方式表達。本文覆蓋了所有內容要點，較好地完成了試題規定的任務。其中，寫作主題突出，詳略得當，應用了較多的語法結構和詞彙，而且有效的使用了語句間的連線成分，使全文機構緊湊。本文敘述清楚，描寫細緻，準確運用了很多富有表現力的詞和句型，例如：“set off early”，“enjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view”, ”were shocked to see litter here and there “等，將活動的情形很形象地描述了出來。

　　積累卡片英漢互譯

　　好詞1 set off 出發2. litter n.廢棄物3.respectively adv.分別地

　　好句1.While climbing the mountain, we enjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view .

　　在爬山時，我們享受著溫暖的陽光和美麗的風景。

　　1. However, when we reached the top, we were shocked to see litter here and there, such as bottles and banana peels.

　　然而，當我們登上山頂，被眼前的一幕驚呆了：瓶子和香蕉皮這樣的廢棄物到處都是。

　　評析：細節描寫，生動形象。“shock”一詞也用得生動傳神。