如何提升雅思寫作水平之語法篇
想要雅思作文得高分,就要掌握好語法的內容,下面小編給大家分享一個提高語法水平的乾貨!
語法自測
我寫了這麼幾個句子,請各位看官自己找找錯誤***資料隨意編的,請勿當真~***:??
1.?The?environment?has?been?damaged?severely,?we?need?to?protect?our?environment.???
2.?The?air?in?rural?areas?is?much?better?than?urban?areas.??
3.?There?are?two?people?sit?there?and?talk?with?each?other?happily.??
4.?It?is?benefit?to?people?if?they?could?persist?on?exercise.??
5.?Knowing?that?students?may?be?tempted?from?TV?programs,?it?is?important?that?students?should?be?supervised?by?parents?at?home.??
6.?Government?needs?to?protect?our?environment.??
7.?Teacher?salaries?rose?from?70%?in?1981?to?80%?in?2001.??
8,?The?number?of?married?Americans?reduced?from?100000?in?1922?to?50000?in?1930.??
9.?The?price?of?iPhone?reached?a?peak?which?is?3400?rmb?in?1990.???
答案?
1.?The?environment?has?been?damaged?severely,?we?need?to?protect?our?environment.???缺少and/so連線詞??
2.?The?air?in?rural?areas?is?much?better?than?urban?areas.???
比較物件錯誤???應該是....better?than?that?in?urban?areas.??
3.?There?are?two?people?sit?there?and?talk?with?each?other?happily.??
動詞數量問題***更深層次是非謂語錯誤***???sit和talk都加ing???
4.?It?is?benefit?to?people?if?they?could?persist?on?exercise.???
最簡單粗暴但是很多同學犯的錯誤???benefit改成beneficial??????
5.?Knowing?that?students?may?be?tempted?from?TV?programs,?it?is?important?that?students?should?be?supervised?by?parents?at?home.???
邏輯主語的問題,逗號的後面應該改成???.......,?parents?need?to?supervise?students?at?home.??
6.?Government?needs?to?protect?our?environment.???government是可數名詞哦???
7.?Teacher?salaries?rose?from?40%?in?1981?to?50%?in?1991.???40%和50%後面各加一個of?the?total?school?spending***來源自劍8T2T1***???8,?The?number?of?married?Americans?reduced?from?100000?in?1922?to?50000?in?1930.???reduce表示的並不是具體數字的下降,改成簡單的decline/decrease/drop即可??
9.?The?price?of?iPhone?reached?a?peak?which?is?3400?rmb?in?1990.???不要使用定從去描述句子,你可以用with連線?
總結
腦袋裡面暫時就想到了這九個小句子,如果你覺得可以輕鬆找到8個句子全部的語法錯誤所在,那麼理論上來說,你應該是具備了6.5及6.5分以上分數的語法水平,請注意我的措詞,僅僅是語法水平,但這個語法水平是必不可少的。如果有4~5個句子你可以比較輕鬆的找到問題,那麼6分的語法水平應該是差不多的,這些問題是找我批改的作文裡面最容易出現的一些簡單問題***除了句子5稍微有一點點難***,避免這些可以幫助寫作6.5分以下的同學提高0.5分左右,當然,還有單詞的拼寫、可數or不可數***這個其實對我來說也是煩死人=?=***以及主謂一致等小問題,都要儘可能的避免。原來有個學生聽了我的課,跑去跟助教說“Panda老師說了,語法錯誤是沒關係的,錯了也不減分!”我聽到助教的反饋之後表示很無奈,因為我的原話是“如果你在一篇大作文or一篇小作文裡面犯的所有錯誤控制在3~4個,那麼考官如果大發慈悲or眼神不太好,其實並不會減分”。我也發現有一些同學是隻會聽到對他們有利的話,至於是不是有條件or前提,他們不管=?=那麼如果是要求7or7以上的寫作分數,請你儘量保證整篇文章不要出現語法錯誤吧親。
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如何提升雅思寫作水平之語法篇