大學英語作文簡評

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　　：Learn to Treasure What You Have Got

　　The biggest weakness of human nature is that they don't know how to treasure what has been achieved. This is exactly the reason why we always think that "the grass is greener on the other side of the fence", and also the explanation to most of the betrayals and regrets in life. We won't be conscious of how important something is until the moment we lose it.

　　The fatal shortcoming is reflected in our childhood. A kid may easily get fond of other kids' toys and begin to treat his own ones like garbage. A little girl may burst into tears when another kid takes one of her dolls away, even if she does not like this doll at all before the robbery. As grown ups, we still can't stop scrambling for dolls. Sarcastically, it's uncertain whether they are really that priceless to us or not.

　　The Bible has never failed to teach people to learn the true meaning of treasure and gratitude. But it seems that few of us are good students. Sometimes we suddenly realize what we have is precious, but the satisfaction will not last for long. We forget about it the next day, and begin our greedy, endless hunt again for what we haven't got yet.

　　Maybe it's hard to change human nature. So the only thing we can do is to remind ourselves to be grateful again and again,and learn lessons from bitter regrets time after time. A grateful mood is difficult to keep for we are too forgetful to the pains we have suffered, but as long as we can feel the gratitude, we will begin to relish our life.

　　An easily satisfied person is always the one who is easy to be happy. We all know the following story.

　　A vagrant is lying on the bench, enjoying the sunshine. A millionaire comes to ask him, "Why don't you go to work and make some money?" "Why should I?" "Then you can come back and enjoy the sunshine more comfortably!" But the vagrant answers, "Now I am comfortable enough, so it's not necessary to go to work at all." The interesting story just wants to show us that the "well being" standard of your life is determined by your attitude. Anyway, enjoying your own beautiful green grass with gratitude is far more satisfying than envying your neighbor's.

　　簡 評

　　人們都說“知足常樂”。可又有多少人珍惜自己所擁有的東西，不羨摹別人呢?作者開篇就點明瞭這個道理，然後分別就兒童喜新厭舊的心理，以及成人貪婪、健忘的本性展開了一番論述，最後用一個有趣的故事說明一個人幸福的標準是由自己的態度決定的，從而進一步論證了本文的觀點。

　　本篇議論文論點鮮明、結構緊湊、語言流暢、發人深省。作者觀察細緻，感受深刻，分析透徹，足見他是位熱愛思考的有心人。語言上略有不妥之處，雖無大礙，但有改進的餘地，以求更加純熟、地道。

　　點評教師：時麗娜

　　：should newspapers be replaced

　　with the development of our society,changes occur everyday. every morning we get up only to find that science and technology have simultaneously bumped into our room and soon spread to the whole world. digital camera has replaced camera;mp3 in place of discman and walkman; intelligence administrating society instead of man-administrating community. surely the media field has also been influenced. the traditional way of printing news through newspapers has now been confronted with the never-met challenge. we begin to wonder, should the news paper be replaced?

　　some people hold that the newspaper is bound to be media of the past. to start with, time plays the most important role.as is shown, what has been in the newspaper is outdated. that is to say, if we want to approach the latest news, newspaper is simply not a good way. for example, on sept. 11, the moment the event took place, internet and tv followed right away.that's just what technology has brought us. to follow is its limitation in reporting news. no newspaper can present all aspects of our life, for each serves a different goal. that means we have to consult different newspapers to meet our different needspared with other ways of media, computer, for instance,through which we can get everything we want to know with only a little tapping of our fingers, is superior.

　　quite on the contrary, others hold the opinion that even with the development of science and technology, newspaper, as symbol of the traditional media, won't disappear, for some of its advantages can't be replaced. first of all, it's convenient to carry about wherever you are. newspapers can be easily packed in your suitcase, and can be bought everywhere. how to imagine carrying a computer, only for several pieces of news? second,newspapers offer a free choice for its readers. having a news paper, you can select what you do or do not want to read while tv or radio or even computer will probably confine your eyes to those that you regard as rubbish. last, newspapers offer comments. generally speaking, newspapers, especially formal ones,include formal remarks on the important events that provide you with a better understanding.

　　concerning those two opposed opinions, i support the latter. though the highly developed science and technology influence almost every corner of the world and quicken the pace of globalization which makes the idea of "sharing the source" come true, newspaper, as the traditional way of media, cannot be abolished, not only because of its irreplaceable advantages but its collectability and its inner charm of witnessing the good old days. the form changes, but the spirit never.

　　簡 評

　　資訊時代，報紙是否應該被取代?對此當然爭議很多。作者對兩種對立的看法分別進行了討論，最後表明自己的立場。

　　本文的開場白寫得非常成功，娓娓道來，引人入勝。對兩種立場的論述雖筆墨略過於均勻，但說理基本讓人信服。總結性呈辭起到了一定的深化主題的作用。

　　通篇思路清晰，文風樸實，語言通順，只是有少數過長的句子以及中文式表達要改進。另有些句子中斷句太多，影響了意義的流暢，也顯得煩瑣。如“compared with other ways of media，computer，for instance，through which we can get everything we want to know with only a little tapping of our fingers，is superior.”又如：“qulte on the contrary，others hold the opinion that even with the development“science and technology，newspaper，as symbol of the traditional media，won，t disappear，for some of“s advantages can't be replaced.”

　　：Mood

　　Listening to the CD you sent to me "the solo piano",which is my favorite style of music there is something painful to soak into my body, little by little. The feeling is one thing named "loneliness", from a worn heart on a distant land. The heart is yours.

　　Without doubt, you are really a special friend of mine. We lived and learned love. We raced the sea and challenged the sky.From you I learned what it meant to laugh as well as cry, and I learned how to give as well as how to take.

　　Before I met you, I thought the sky was gray. I was a high achiever, but no matter how hard I worked, how many times I attempted, there was still a strong force which constrained me.So I was sensitive to everything around me. I really tasted the flavor of "loneliness." But you pulled me out. I still remember that night Snow was descending deep in places that looked shadow and covered up all kinds of filthy things You came up to me who was weeping and gave me a piece of paper, which It's easy in everyday life.

　　To be caught up in webs of nonexistent problems,

　　Worries with not enough space to prove themselves.

　　Depressions with no meaning.

　　All these forces working together.

　　Gaining more and more power by pushing you

　　Further back into yourself.

　　Until it's self pity.

　　Life is against you.

　　Everything is wrong.

　　Then bitterness.

　　The world is at fault, you begin to hate

　　Then it's over without having ever existed.

　　Life is beautiful.

　　You are beautiful

　　The world is yours

　　Cry tears of joy.

　　How could something so right ever be wrong?

　　But turn and look again.

　　You will be running for the rest of your life,

　　Trying to escape the reality of mood.

　　And the human mind...

　　You said to me with a temperate voice:"Hear the song of the bird? In spite of the snow and the wet and the coldness and the loneliness, the bird is singing. It believes that it can fly to

　　I beamed, only for your word. Henceforth, I didn't feel lonely, because of you. Now I want to give you the poem you've given me and tell you: You won't feel lonely because of me."

　　We don't fear the punishment of life;we just can't suffer the days without communication and love. We've dreamed of the serene life.

　　The dawn had just broken above the distant horizon and the pure silver light of morning flooded the field. We were treated to a brilliant display of rounded hill, dotted with sheep. Wild blue berries grew along the path home. Everything was in bloom. We rode on a swan boat or just sat in the sun; we were not afraid of the coming rainstorm, because we soaked our psyche in the sunshine and we were sure that we could recover and rebuild the beauty after the tempest.

　　So you must be sturdy. You are capable of coping with any difficulty. Please feel in touch with the world out of your window. You can smell my breath in the fresh air. You can see my childlike smile through the sunshine. You can hear my mild calling from the song of a lovely bird.

　　Remember: keep a beautiful mind. I will pray for you everyday, and my heart will go with you wherever you are.

　　簡 評

　　世界上什麼最珍貴?人與人之間的溫情、友情和愛情總能戰勝一切黑暗和煩惱——正如作者在心情灰暗、寂寞孤獨的時候，一首溫情的小詩給她帶來了光明，帶來了希望，讓她體會到只要有感情的存在，一切都是可以戰勝的。

　　本文以第一、第二人稱寫作，給人印象深刻。另外作為心情感言，作者在描寫心情時婉婉道來，用詞典雅，如：“Before I met you，I thought the sky was gray...How many times I attempted，there was still a strong force which constrained me...I really tasted the flavor of‘loneliness.’”等。

　　溫馨的文筆，感人的描述使本文值得一讀。

　　點評教師：張雪波

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